This is simply a critique post that I'm making for my characters in various role-plays across InsaneJournal and Inksome. Mind, I'm asking for actual critique here. Not "OMG U SUX, QUIT PLAYIN!!!1!11!". That's not critique and I will delete the comments that are like that. Actual critique, however, would be very welcome, especially since I'm pretty sure I fail at a lot of my characters. <-<;;;

Annon commenting is on, IP logging would be off but I dunno how to follow it anyway, so!

Here we go! Characters will be followed by links to their profiles

The characters I play, their series and where I play them:


Manic the Hedgehog (Sonic Underground) - crazy_quills
Alphonse Elric (Fullmetal Alchemist anime) - sealed_soul
Akito/Agito Wanijima (Air Gear (anime based)) - sky_shark
Larxene (Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories) - lightning_nymph

DownBelow @ IJ:
Older!Tails (Sonic the Hedgehog games) - failedtwotails
Alphonse Elric (Fullmetal Alchemist anime) - sealed_memory
Agito Wanijima (Air Gear (anime based)) - lone_fang

Earth 12 @ IJ
Akito/Agito/Lind Wanijima (Air Gear) - fanged_wings
Larxene (Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories) - lightning_edge

Marina Asylum @ Inksome
Akito/Agito Wanijima (Air Gear) - sky_shark
Manic the Hedgehog (Sonic Underground) - sky-shark

Vardskepp - vardskepp 
Akito/Agito Wanijima (Air Gear) - fanged_wings 

Wonderland @ IJ:
Alphonse Elric (Fullmetal Alchemist anime) - alchemic_soul
Akito/Agito/Lind Wanijima (Air Gear) - bloodredsky
Yuna (Final Fantasy X) - dancing_prayer
Beast Boy (Teen Titans cartoon) - greenbeastie
Husky (+Anima) - silveraquarius


Dropped characters:
Raven (Zoids Chaotic Century/Guardian Force) - winged_madness
Cynder (The Legend of Spyro: A new Beginning/The Eternal Night/Dawn of the Dragon) - darkwings
Beast Boy (Teen Titans cartoon) - animality
Younger!Tails (Sonic the Hedgehog games) - teenytinytails
Gatomon (Digimon Adventure/Digimon Adventure 02) - digikitty
Lost Soul aka the Grim Reaper (Gamerz Heaven) - the_enforcer